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     The room was poorly lit with a singular light that gently swayed back and forth, illuminating the room in all of it's murky splendor. A man was sitting on a wooden chair, splintered from lack of maintenance. He was a man in his late forties, his short hair was a filthy black mess of grease and dandruff. His limbs were restricted by steel cuffs and his face could barely be seen through his matted hair. Exhaustion and despair were plastered all over his gaunt blue eyes as he squinted intensely into the darkness beyond and was met by two glowing blue eyes, seething with violence. "My, my, what do we have here? Another willing participant in my little experiments? Don't worry, we'll have plenty of time to get acquainted first!" A metallic voice cackled with murderous glee, as the unseen menace moved in, the man could start to make out the rest of it's body. It wore a black hooded cloak that covered most of it's body aside from it's hands and face. It had rigid metal claws and it's face was mostly hidden aside from it's pupiless blue orbs that glared at the man. It looked like someone ripped out it's teeth and replaced them with steak knives. It pulled out a scalpel and plunged the icy cold blade into the human's abdomen, the menace laughed insanely as the man screamed with agony, his anguished wails echoed into the walls, never to be heard from anyone but his tormentor.
Oh hey everyone, you thought I was dead and not writing, BUT THINK AGAIN!

This is a contest entry for :iconraiira: since it was a contest based on writing skills, how could I have refused!

But the trick was doing this in 200 - 250 words, no more, no less!

So for this I have featured Cyrus as the victim and Malice as the ol' fashioned torturer, I thought this would be the perfect thing to get my rear into gear again after my long absence, do tell me what you think. :)
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kritken Featured By Owner May 15, 2012
well I could not expect less from dark malice
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
He's just simply the bee's knees!
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johnnywhoa Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ooh, very creepy. I like.
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Heh, I'm glad you think so since I had limited room to work on. :D
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Sinneli Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Student
Great. You entered. How am I supposed to win?
Your description is really vivid and gruesome. It's...

-Wait for it-

LEGENDARY.
That's getting old, though. Legendary thing. -_-
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Simple, close your eyes and hope for the best. :P
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BandanaBlue Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ohh creepy! I do like the way you word things. You use really nice ones like "gaunt" and "anguished." They are such delicious descriptors.

Also I'll be entering too. So may the best man win! >8D
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Why thank you :D

............. You sly bastard! >8U
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BandanaBlue Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol.
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