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Ignis Klav - an ancient lich that controls fire, he was awakened from his hibernation when he sensed Darkseeker's fleet, he wishes to purge this evil from the planet before it moves on to the next planet to restore order to the universe, so he decided to find seven other capable individuals in the fight against Darkseeker, despite his relation with fire, he is the leader and most calm of the eight heroes and often keeps a cool demeanor while considering all life precious, where he originated from is still unkown, he is capable of creating high tempretures and raging infernos easily capable of ravaging landscapes, he controls fire to a high degree, never losing control of his focus, he has no flesh and wears a suit of armor designed to handle his abilities, he carries a legendary halberd into battle that enhances his abilities

Hydrophobia - a famous prisoner who was an experiment for super soldiers, her mind is bonded to water, allowing her to control water and use a variety of moves, she is also capable of launching water at high speeds, cutting anything in it's path as well as the ability to turn invisible, she can also alter the PH of the water, making the water a dangerous chemical weapon, despite being a high class prisoner, she has her own code of ethnics and does not like Darkseeker killing innocents for mere fun, she joined Ignis Klav's group so she could later repay her debts to her country, she looks like a humanoid body of water and only has two glowly eyes on her featureless face, she is the loner of the group, often meditating on the next battle to keep sharp rather then socializing, but she is very nice when it comes down to it, she wields an cybernetic trident into battle that improves her abilities

Plasmius - once a human madman, he traded his mortal form to a cybernetic organism so he could merge with it, resulting in a robot that can channel electricity through his two blades, one that is his left hand and on the tip of his tail, he can channel this energy to make his blades cut anything or for energy blasts, he also can drain power from nearby sources and can travel as electricity, he is very immoral towards life, considering it to only get in the way of his mission, he will not hesistate to cut down anyone in his way, the only reason he joined the group was that he knew that he couldn't take on Darkseeker alone, despite his cruel ways though, he knows how to get the job done, he is the thinker of the group, often coming up with the plans, his two blades improve his combat abilities

The Entity - a enigmatic yet silly golem that serves as a protector of Earth, he was activated by Ignis Klav since Klav knew the golem would help the team greatly, the golem has control over earth, allowing him to travel underground while possessing incredible terraforming abilities as well as a telekinetic control over the ground itself, he can also mix various minerals together, often resulting in explosive attacks, he has a featureless face with strange markings covering his metal humanoid body, the group can't really tell what he is thinking since he has no face unless he talks, but he does often tend to make light of situations, he think his body was fused with the spirit of a joker, but that's just him, despite his joking nature, he becomes shy when someone asks him about his past, he also becomes serious in battle as he is the tank of the group, he also wields a giant battlehammer that can destroy mountain tops with one mighty swing

Ravager - a battle hungry spirit of the winds that just wants to fight Darkseeker, he reluctantly joined Klav's group upon seeing Darkseeker's power firsthand, while he was just content fighting people on his land, he knew things would change soon, he has control over the winds itself, making viscious tornadoes and gale winds capable of reducing buildings into rubble as well as sonic blasts, he is also very manuverable and can make illusions to disorient his enemies, making him very evasive in the process, physical attacks have little effect on him, but he is still vunerable to energy attacks, he looks like a floating hooded, rag with chains wrapped around it with two glaring green eyes, he tends to live for the battle, often getting impatient when there are no enemies to kill, he is the scout of the group, using his abilities to observe what is going on ahead of the group, though this usually gets him excited, his conversations with other people tend to get akward since all he usually wants to talk about is the coming battle or a battle they already won, he carries a magical scythe that makes him devastating on the battlefield

Ivan "Glacies" - a cold hearted piece of armor possesed by a human soul, he found Klav and his group instead of Klav finding him, he immediately offered his services to Klav on one condition, help him find Terraforce and Novaforce, why he wants to do this is unknown since he says he has his own reasons, he has absolute control over ice as he can lower tempretures at will and make the very place he touches turn to ice, making close quarters combat with him deadly as he can freeze anything he touches as well as making ice blasts, he looks like a large, medieval metal knight with ice coming out of his gaps, he is ice personified, rarely talking and often emotionless, when he does talk though, he offers great advice when he does speak however, making him the advisor of the group as he often coordinates with Plasmius, he wields a serated claymore fused with ice into battle, making him particularly devastating in battle

Vigor - a mighty being made of light who stands for justice and protection, he gladly joined Klav in his quest to rid the universe of Darkseeker, he always saves any innocents first before resuming his mission, often getting on the nerves of the more dark minded team members, he has control over light and can make it into an assortment of makeshift weaponry only he can wield as well as the ability to blind people,, he can travel through light and make lasers as well, he looks like a being of pure light, but wears a special piece of armor to keep his physical form together, being the true hero of the group, he will save others first if he can help it, he is also generous and kind as well, he carries a scimitar into combat, it is capable of great power

The Tinkerer - a cybernetic shadow being of great mechanical prowess, she is the last of her kind, but doesn't really care, the only reason she joined was to see how well her weapons would work against a foe such as Darkseeker, to her, it would be her legacy, she builds weapons mostly for her own morbid curiosities, to see how well it kills the target and how horrific the death is, since she has control over darkness, she can inflict horrendous wounds on her opponnent internally, bypassing any defenses and can travel through the darkness, her cybernetic attachments allow her to create a variety of makeshift weapons for use on the battlefield, she tends to stay out of the thick of the battle though and supports from a distance, when not fighting, she is the technician of the group and often focuses on improving the teams weaponry, armor, and at times, their bodies!, giving them a variety of nasty powers, attachments and just improving their overall performance, she carries a makeshift workshop in a pocket dimension that she can release at any moment she wants, but her morbid nature tends to make the rest of the team wary of her as she often tries to experiment on them in their sleep, she carries a spatha into combat that also acts as a makeshift assualt rifle that fires a dark energy that feeds off of negative emotions, the more dark the people around behave, the more powerful the weapon gets

all heroes are capable of firing energy blasts, going at high speeds, and superhuman strength and endurance as are the villians, though certain people excel at some things more then others
It's done, hope you like the bio and tell me what you think, now I must resume my stories work
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StarGamerWorld Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011
Oh wow. I love the idea of a lich of fire being the heroic leader and protagonist. The other guys look cool, but I'd love to see more of Ignis sometime :D
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
why thank you, I should be able to get the next part up in a week or two
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StarGamerWorld Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011
Okay sounds good! :D Have you or anyone else done any pics of Ignis though? :)
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
nope, I lack the skills to draw unfortunately :(
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StarGamerWorld Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011
Ah, right... Actually how popular are your characters? It seems your villain, Darkseeker, is the most popular :P
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Darkseeker is the star of the show, had a few nice friends do fan work of him, but I will only consider his form from Ross's gallary to be cannon, his first form at least
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StarGamerWorld Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011
...Oh really? And here I though Ignis was the protagonist... ^^;
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
no worries, common mistake, how often does the story have a villian as the protagonist and the hero as the antagonist
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Kostmeyer Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010
Interesting characters - I especially like the idea of the team leader being a lich! That has loads of possibilities and potential storylines. Are the rest of the team aware that he's an undead creature?

It's hard to say more about this group without knowing the context of their stories - what sort of stories do you plan to feature them in? And who is this Darkseeker who they're fighting? Enquiring minds want to know!

:)
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
indeed they do, but they all have the same objective in mind, as for Darkseeker, he's an ancient entity that seeks to devour all of reality
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berserking Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2010
man you should have some rough sketch for each of them.
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
perhaps
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Trudsss Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
All sounds pretty interesting! I'd be a Ravager!
First advice I would give is put some full stops :) Otherwise it makes each paragraph feel like it's all being shouted at once with no pause. Also, there's a few typos, so quickly run it through spell check and you'll be fine!
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
thanks for the input man :)
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ConspiracyOfRavenz Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
You wanted my opinion on this right?
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
yep
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ConspiracyOfRavenz Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I think its splendid. like it XD the powers are definitely unique.
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ThorsAssassin Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
Awesome!

I am really digging Entity as well but Vigor seems like a badass concept as well!

Got any visual representation for these yet?
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
well unless I can get someone to draw them, highly unlikely since I lack the skills and resources to do it :(
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ThorsAssassin Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010
Keep you eyes out man! You can find artists here on DA that take requests or hold mini contest for free art or hold kiribans for someone catching a screenshot of a certain pageview number for free art. There are tons of ways.

Also for a minimal fee, I know a lot of artists that do art for dirt cheap.
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
well, I can only do the free stuff since my budget is very tight
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ThorsAssassin Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2010
Well there ya go then, takes a bit of work but you can find the odd free pieces here and there for giveaways and kiribans. Good luck to you!!
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UndyingNephalim Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2010
I definitely tend to favor Entity. Plus The Entity is an awesome name.
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
heh, thanks, seems like a lot of people like him
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IsisMasshiro Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010
I say for first, that I don’t have strong opinions about things I don’t know well. But I will still write something.

You sure have great imagination with these characters and they all are very strong ones…They can make more destruction by alone than a couple of godzillas I presume.
I clearly see that you have used a lot of time and effort to create these characters, there is so much details in every hero. Darn good work I have to say, even I don’t have so much clue about this big word you have created…it sure seem to be big.
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
thanks, that means alot to me
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IsisMasshiro Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010
Ya welcome. Keep writing.
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Fenix007 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010
Sounds interesting enough, although i'd like to see more pictures of them so I actually know what they look like. Overall the team seems well balanced, but I think u need at least one more female to the group, perhaps Hydrophobia or the Ice guy would be the eaiest to swich.
P.s. Did u ever do anything with Cyris? I don't recall seeing him in any of your work recently...
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I'm going to make hydrophobia a female, as for Cyris, he was in part eight of the story, you probably missed him, thanks for the feedback though
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nemo1188 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010
they all sound pretty much perfect. almost too perfect. some of them do have some fatal weaknesses , but for some characters i didn't see any . that's just nitpicking tho. Also a nitpick is that The Tinkerer is the only female character :bucktooth:

sorry if this is jsut a waste of space.i'm not good at designing characters . let alone creating bios for them.
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
thanks for the feedback, it is true that The Tinkerer is the only female character, but there are two other males, everyone else has no genders
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nemo1188 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010
btw is the story set in some steam-punk enviorment ?
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
dark scifi, world is mostly destroyed by my villian
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nemo1188 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010
ok gotcha.
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TheMoonSamurai Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010
very interesting indeed.
although I would change one thing...

if I were you... I'd change hydrophobia from a male to a female.

I just feel that a female for water would be good. other than that everything is just amazing! .-D
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
hmm, perhaps, but I'm so used to seeing females tied with water
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TheMoonSamurai Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010
well then...
electricity?


I don't know I just think that there should be 2 female characters. .-P
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Raveninskyprime Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010
As far as the concepts go, I do like them. That said, there seems to be a large number of characters when there seems to be enough content to talk about just one.
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I'll be going to more specific bios later
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Ralokone Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010
i like them

they all seem interesting

i read at like 200 miles per hour

so is this hybrid fantasy sci fi?

i like science fantasy a good deal
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
it is science fiction
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CanadianBorg Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010
Hmmm... Most interesting. I rather like the idea of the Tinkerer, a dark being that joins the side of good for lack of a better option.
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
heh, thanks so much
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Ross-A-Campbell Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
I think they all sound super fucking magnificent, and sounds like they are going to be in some pretty epic battles. Seriously, they all sound like awesome characters, I would like to know more about their defaults though, limiting a hero's capacity/ personality/understanding can really make the story interesting. They are also very different, beings of very different capabilities. I think adding a character with the same abilities as another could help a story along. For example, they could learn from each other or hate each other, be jealous of one another and end up creating huge tensions in the group thus deepening the story with common human emotions. They could even fall in love and then get in a huge fight, or one is exiled from the group and the others ambition to kill darkseeker is greater than his/her love for the other and carries on the quest while having to leave the other behind. Alot of inner conflict to be gained, alot of reader interest.

Anyways, I for one, am very curious to see how your story will work out. I think you've done a great job here!

Keep me updated dude!
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
ahh, thanks dude, that means a lot to me, I can whip up some more specific bios
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Ross-A-Campbell Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Looking forward to it.
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BandanaBlue Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool bios.:)
They seem all like interesting characters.
I like the Entity the most. I just like optimists.
They can be both annoying and funny at the same time!:D
I can't wait to see how they work into the story.
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
silly me, I mean "that"
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BandanaBlue Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Really? I think you meant "hat.":icontophatplz:
Bring on the awkward situations!
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ridleysghost Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
hats!, have you been playing tf2?
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